Thursday, 18 June 2009
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Something Better
Little Bit's acrostic poems.
I know it has a silent
S, but this piece of
Land in the middle of the sea,
A pure shock for the eyes of me,
Nowhere to go, nowhere to see except the sea, not even a
Distant sound from a building, though there are cool wonders
to see, for the eyes of me (or you).
See, salmon is
A very waterlike thing, not
Like my knee. My knee is
More a body type, you see. Swimming with the
Octopi and the tunafish in the sea,
Now listen, there are interests besides your knee
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Comments (12)
such talent, it runs in the family. I have missed coming over here, I suck at xanga.
Those are awesome!!
Little Bit comes to TR's rescue. I love it. MORE!
That is amazingly wonderful! She is only 8 and a half. I am truly blown away!
I'm smiling and that's a good thing.
Pretty impressive poetry for an 8 year old!!
Love it! I can see she's inherited the family writing gene. (Poor dear.)
Those are really good! Guess you have blogging back up, huh!
how did the editing assignment go?
Love these! I'll have to show them to my daughter....she got giddy with excitement over acrostic poems in kindergarten and 1st grade.
Genius!